by TheFutile Oct 10, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I can hear you breathing |
by Mommy And Me
Other then a couple 'you' where i believe there should be 'your' i think you did i lovely job writing this poem. BUT it is one long run-on-poem as i like to call em. put some puncuation with in the poem and i believe you will take it up to a whole new level. |