Comments : Intimidation

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Melissa Melissa Melissa
    Your writing is SO powerful. Cuts right to the meat of the situation and in such an original and visceral way. I'm always so impressed with your writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Amazing poem... i like this one
    a good and a good ending bravo.. 5/5

    (I feel as heavy as a mountain,
    but I'm only a molehill
    on the edge of earths bend)

    I like this lines.....