by WrittenInTheStars Oct 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She was 16 the day she died, |
This Poem was amazing. Another great work from you. I Loved the structure. The last sentence in every line stood out because the three lines before it rhymed and the last lines didn't. Loved it. Absolutely loved it. |
Tear-jerking, yet so beautiful. |
by nikki
This is really sad, but really good. i like it!great imagery!! very sad though! |
by Kimberley
Omg!! im crying. i never cry!!!! i love this. it is so sad but so good. keep it up, youve got talent!!! ~KM~ |
Wow that is an amazing poem. Definitly keep up the good work.! |