Love Suicide

by WrittenInTheStars   Oct 11, 2008


She was 16 the day she died,
in disbelief her lover cried,
he now lies limp by her side,
her hand wrapped up in his.

A suicide note clutched in his hand,
what it said he could not stand,
so he held the gun in his hand,
and he pulled the trigger.

Her parents came home that night,
her mother screamed loud in fright,
the ambulance lights flashing bright,
but they were far too late.

They were buried side by side,
their friends and families gathered, all had cried,
no one could believe that they had died,
memories are all they have.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    This Poem was amazing. Another great work from you. I Loved the structure. The last sentence in every line stood out because the three lines before it rhymed and the last lines didn't. Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

    5/5
    Great Job
    Keep It Up!

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Tear-jerking, yet so beautiful.
    I liked the rhyming scheme. A very interesting piece.
    5/5, Nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    This is really sad, but really good. i like it!great imagery!! very sad though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Omg!! im crying. i never cry!!!! i love this. it is so sad but so good. keep it up, youve got talent!!! ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Wow that is an amazing poem. Definitly keep up the good work.!

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