Wow that is an amazing poem. Definitly keep up the good work.!

Omg!! im crying. i never cry!!!! i love this. it is so sad but so good. keep it up, youve got talent!!! ~KM~

This is really sad, but really good. i like it!great imagery!! very sad though!

Tear-jerking, yet so beautiful.
I liked the rhyming scheme. A very interesting piece.
5/5, Nice work

This Poem was amazing. Another great work from you. I Loved the structure. The last sentence in every line stood out because the three lines before it rhymed and the last lines didn't. Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

5/5
Great Job
Keep It Up!

-Ally