Firstly I'd like to say that I'm a fan of your poetry.
I love this piece so much, it somehow reminds me of myself, and most of the teens around the world.

Come back to that sweet girl,
We all used to know,
Let go of what hurts you,
This hate that you sow.
This stanza was my fave out of the whole piece, very interesting work here, I really love it :)

First stanza was really so captivating, I've admired it enough to complete the piece with much interest.
You seem like those old members, the good poets I miss on this site, I'm so glad you're on.

And last thing, of course not to mention the last stanza, the poem was ended perfectly =]]
awesome job
xxx