My Faraway Home

What I loved about this piece is the descriptions. They weren't the same cliche wording that is used but you explained the shape and the sight of it so well. A well-expressed piece and I was glad to have come upon this. The style was easy to read and flowed continuously in my mind while I was reading. Excellent job, I have no suggestions.

5/5 from me, God bless you, child of God!

~MaryAnne

It really does seem quite peaceful. I guess whenever you put an actual person in a beautiful surrounding even that can;t help ease a troubled mind. Well, anyways. I thought this had great imagry. There is an excellent rhythmic pattern. I really enjoyed reading this. Really fantastic job! 10/5

Your vivid imagery and descriptions were so well written
i really enjoyed reading this poem.

you had me at the first stanza:
Crisp afternoon breeze mirrors a happy home
of tranquility, that lies abundantly beneath
the azure sky and white feathery clouds.

it really set the mood and caught my attention right then.

you're a really good writer
keep it up.

I really like your style and find no flaw at all

Another beautifully written poem
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

What a wonderfull poem !!!!
i can c that u r missing the old places but somehow u dont regret being where u r now thats really so deep..

4 sure i have to give u 5/5 on this

expressed perfectly