A secret place (Club contest)

That was a very lovely description of the ocean. I felt like I was really diving through a sea of beautiful colors and it was very breathtaking. The vocabulary was also great. 5/5

This is a very good poem. You painted out a portrait to me by putting alot of attention on detail and color. Very good poem and I love the vocabulary as well. Keep it up.

Hope you brough back lots of pictures. A splashing good job.

Your poem allowed me to view a world I wish I could see firsthand.

Grant,

A wonderful discription of this wonderful world, not just the corals, but some of its creatures too. You take the reader on a dive, swimming through the reef, taking in all the marvels along the way.

I have looked at the image and I wanted to write something completely different, but alas no time :(

Well done

Michael