Comments : A secret place (Club contest)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Grant,

    A wonderful discription of this wonderful world, not just the corals, but some of its creatures too. You take the reader on a dive, swimming through the reef, taking in all the marvels along the way.

    I have looked at the image and I wanted to write something completely different, but alas no time :(

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your poem allowed me to view a world I wish I could see firsthand.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Hope you brough back lots of pictures. A splashing good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by David Wallace

    This is a very good poem. You painted out a portrait to me by putting alot of attention on detail and color. Very good poem and I love the vocabulary as well. Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was a very lovely description of the ocean. I felt like I was really diving through a sea of beautiful colors and it was very breathtaking. The vocabulary was also great. 5/5