by Mr. Darcy
Grant, |
by Sylvia
Your poem allowed me to view a world I wish I could see firsthand. |
Hope you brough back lots of pictures. A splashing good job. |
This is a very good poem. You painted out a portrait to me by putting alot of attention on detail and color. Very good poem and I love the vocabulary as well. Keep it up. |
by SashaMirage
That was a very lovely description of the ocean. I felt like I was really diving through a sea of beautiful colors and it was very breathtaking. The vocabulary was also great. 5/5 |