Oh wow, I thought it was just another heartbreak story until you said what it was do you just look up random news and write poems about it or was that someone you know, anyway on to the poem.
I was waiting for a ryhme/stanza to hit me and you threw one right at me.

Oh yes! He almost forgot. She no longer remembered him for so long.
The sound of their fastly beating hearts was no longer their song.

It reminds me of something that has happened to me.

The length of your poem is extrodinary but in order to make long poems catch someones attention and make them read it(because I think you were giving up on this one) was that the Name/First stanza have to be breathtaking.
Ive never tried to write really long poems so This is your turf not mine. But it was an ok poem better then ok but not perfect. It seemed forced at times you would randomly lose rythm when you didnt need to but When i saw your profile i thought it said u were 14 idk my eyes might be screwin with me but im 14 to so were both just young bloods in the world 4/5

Oh wow that was a really nice poem. I like the fact that it was a story. I thought that it was going to be a heartbreak love story...but the amnesia made it really interesting...I just wanted to know how you came up with the idea?...did you know that person? 5/5

Your poem was really heartbreaking but the sadness in it make it more nicer and interesting to read