Its not

by rebeccasarah   Oct 11, 2008


Its not your words that bother me,
its your silence.
Its not your stare that kills me,
its how it leads to her.
Its not your voice that makes me cry,
its the name you said.. doesn't belong to me.
Its not you're smile that breaks my heart,
its the fact that its her that makes you happy.
Because, its not you that destroyed me,
its how I didnt complete you.. but she did.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    I really like this poem.. it had a nice flow to it.. and i could really relate.. keep it up..

    aviii*-

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    I love the repetition u did with ur poem well done! 5/5! keep up the awesome work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    I am loving your poems!! espiecally this one!!! it almost brought a tear to my eye. *sniffle* *tear*. i love it. nice flow and good use of words. keep it up! ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by just a poet

    Well written poem, i love contrasting poems so i loved this one. i think its good that you didn't try to make it rhyme, with the contrast it seems to go better this way. also the way you learn of the girls personality to some extent from this is quite expressive aswll. so keep it up. good work and if this is from expericnace i hope you feel better soon.

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