If I could write a poem in free verse this is what I would aim for. The flow is flawless. The imagery is wonderful. The metaphors astromomical. Your choice of words advanced
Over all exquisitely romantic

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Gazing into your azure eyes that glisten like the sea,
induces me, putting me in a entirely variant world.

-That is the best part of the poem. I felt that the poem was a really big challenge for you, at certain parts there are times when the flow struggled.

I was able to say that it's one of the best thought out poems, I can tell that you put a lot of thought into it, but you seemed to lack the flow that goes along with it. I did however enjoy the poem.

I would have liked if you were able to paint a better picture than the one that you did, I felt that it ended to short.

I gave it a 5/5 because I enjoyed the poem, but was sad that it didn't go on further. I hope to see more of the poems that you write.

Your vocabulary is really really big ... I kinda had to look up a couple of words =P . Something I noticed that kind of bothered me is the repetition of lips in the last two stanzas .. In my opinion you should change it up a little , replacing it with something like "mouth" .. I don't know what else , or even just elaborating on something other than kisses like touch or what not . Those were the only things that stood out . SO , 5/5 .

"Gazing into your azure eyes that glisten like the sea,
induces me, putting me in a entirely variant world.
You bestow your amiable lips upon mine with pure bliss,
never letting a breath escape; baby you make me speechless."

I love this stanza because it reminds me the most of my bf and how i feel about him and how i feel when i with him. The whole peom does that but this stanza stood out the most to me.

Great word choice though not everyone might know the meaning of some of the words you used. It definitely does not hurt the poem any.

It really does represent true love at least it does to me. 5/5

Your choice of words impressed me. Every word through the poem seems so carefully picked, and that is absolutely amazing.
The flow of the piece is also great from the beginning to the end, so elegant and natural.
I admire the way you portrayed your emotions here- every line is so vivid, filled with overwhelming beauty and priceless descriptions.
I cannot find anything to critique here, whole poem seems simply flawless, heartfelt and deeply touching.

=Your saccharine words furbish my day so exquisitely,
leaving me with a smile that's impossible to annul.=

Fantastic lines, memorable and filled with such passion. Beautifully writen and also truly creative.

Overall, this poem is different from those cliche love poems that most of the people on here write. Your piece is refreshing, inspirational in so many ways.

=You bestow your amiable lips upon mine with pure bliss=
^^^^
lovely, seemingly simple but so deep.

I like the ending a lot, too, it summed up the poem excellently.

Keep up!

While you had some unusual well written descriptions, [saccharine words furbish; impossible to annul] you mixed it with cliche terms used in a lot of teenage love poems. [azure eyes; pure bliss.] The constant you and we words made it just about impossible to establish a connection as it feels as though the poem is being said to somebody in particular. The word baby, while an okay pet name, threw off whatever balance connection it might have had at that point. Not to say I didn't like your poem. I'm not putting it down. You have the high points with the low points and it's all about alternating until you find the right measure.

The vocabulary in this poem was immaculate! The flow and and topic were great too. I couldn't stop reading... Just... held my attention so well, which is great for poetry.

Butterflies disperse freely tickling me with ecstasy.
^^ This line was my favorite. It's just written so well with such great vocabulary!

5/5 ... definitely!

Amazing job! im speechless! :)

Wow that was very creative and extremly amazing :]

left me speecless:]
5/5