Feelings

Smiles repeat each night
The feelings you ignite
Colors steam from you

(Wow this is beautiful. "colors steam from you" what a perfect line. i love that. very creative)

You suffer through me
Its amazing how lovely
The words you create

(Once again very beauiful.. i love the emotions i get when i read this stanza)

If only you could know
The way you take my woe
Everything is better

(I love that you sad woe, most people would try to say pain or hurt, very clever)

My face flushes red
These feelings unsaid
You make me soar high

(Love the imagery here too)

It's just the way I feel
So amazed that your real
Its exciting me

(I like how the mood changes here, makes me want to smile :) )

Touched by your angel
I feel so special
You make me absolutely
thrilled...

Wow..very powerful poem. Keep it up. Your brillant. Shanik