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by Marie Oct 12, 2008 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Mistress vampire take your bow for are you slaves are kneeling nowHead filled with revenge All she will avenge With desire pull them in Eyes so red full of sin defined body curved at waist Beautiful angelic innocent face Don't be fooled for looks can deceive And overwhelming pain you shall receive She flirts She laughs all for her is going so well Wicked, deadly stare Scream and cry she wont care And she will bite and she will taste Only at night your blood wont waste In her mouth it shall spill your body wont move but stay still Vampire mistress take your bow!! All your slaves are kneeling now
by CrossCut
Very nice work. Loved the description. 5/5
by Diana
This poem is good, well written, descriptive of the character (vampire) 5/5