~Claps~
Holly you have made a wonderful comeback girly.

Though you write of blank pages and the "writer's block sink" you have penned an amazing piece.

Prose and stanza's
cemented to my feet while
syllables crash around my floundering head
^^
I love this part .... it gives me imagery of letters of the alphabet raining from the sky.
I do tend to have a wild imagination don't I ? .... lol

Looking so forward to reading more .... you will find your ink again dear friend. You just need a new pen!

Excellent read Sis
Luanne

I know the feeling..liked this read very much
especially this part:

Harbors are
drifting on the horizon but
I can't swim the distance

Prose and stanza's
cemented to my feet while
syllables crash around my floundering head.

As for a title..how about "Revived"
Tale care.

Interesting topic for a comeback. I have u on my fav authors, so we must have communicated at some point in the distant past. I started in 2004, and 2007 and this year i have only averaged around 10 poems each year, so dont feel bad. Any way welcome back!

Ahhh..congrats on poem# 200..I knew you could do it. tremedous work as usual. I have misssed your work so much..weclome back my dear friend.

Oh yes! This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. This is so amazing! You are very talented, Holly. With or without writers block you write beatiful, powerful poetry. Another perfect ending! ;o)

Holly,
What a wonderful comeback. Great to see those creative juices flowing again.
This poem was remarkable to me because the effect writers block has on even the most passionate people that want to write, and can find nothing to say about anything. Great Job.

I always find it amusing when someone writes a great poem about writers block...I think you have overcome that dreaded disease! You could feel the elation building in the poem.....and then "the blank page" an excellent ending. Well done!

Well done, knew you had it in you. Great job as always.

Love
Mom

Yes it is a bad thing to have but you came out of ok.

Very well written. This verse reminds me on how I feel. All these words, so beautiful and elegant in my mind but when I take the blank page, nothing seems to work for me.

Prose and stanza's
cemented to my feet while
syllables crash around my floundering head.

Congratulations on the win, very well deserverd! Even though you had writer's block, this poem was so beautiful and well-written.

"My words descending
sweetly from the lips of this
melodic creature filling me with hope"

Excellent word choice, that really captivates the reader, and has their full attention, nice job.

"Revived
I tread the water
with newfound determintation
only to find....

this blank piece of paper staring back at me"

Good ending, leaves the reader wanting more. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

Holly
Congrats on the win :)
(((hugs)))
Cindy

RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Catchy,beautiful

Very very creative....i could almost smell the sea salt, hear the seaguls crying, the waves crashing against the sand , the warm sun you drew a very vivid picture in my head great job 5/5 xxx <33

I feel you dog i cant belive i remembered my pass and screen name

I love it...nothing more to say then that lol

5/5 amazging(: x