The Baptism and The Incubus

by LitxUpxWithxLife   Oct 12, 2008


Dark and desolate, The Forces are at work.
Hideous laughter, Driving me berserk.
My sanity cracks like the dirt in the ground.
I scream out for help, but there's no one around.

The bloodthirsty cry emits from my soul.
Embracing my demons, making me whole.
Deceitful laughter echoes through my head.
Form the succubus in my dreams that left me for dead.

Now baptized in the flames of the fallen.
I've stacked my cards on the table, and called all-in.
I'm the giver and the taker.
The do-er and the faker.

Creeping through the night, past each car and ever house.
Sneaking along more quiet than a mouse.
Into your bedroom, I stealthily slide.
Alone in the dark, now no need to hide.

Even in your dreams you are not safe.
Nothing will protect you, not even your Faith.
I am the Incubus walking through your dreams.
Here in your sleep, there's no point to scream.

Even God cannot protect you from me.
The power of Evil in my eyes, all for you to see.
All to feel, is the pain in your womb.
As you come to realize that this is your tomb.

The Prince of Night is secreted in your body.
Now that you've fallen victim to your folly.
You are the bearer of the forbidden son.
Can't you see, you're left with nowhere to run?

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  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    The only thing i do not like in this poem is the ending it seemed a little rushed not so creative.

    in the begining the were a couple of spelling mistakes i beleive. but in there was sense of insanity that was worth reading. for your charecter to accept that fasat the he lost his mind and then to turn around and label his insanity for the purpose of nothing but evil like he so sure of himself. well it was trully what made that one of the most perfect parts to the poem great work.

    -Raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought that the flow was shakey in places and their were a few spelling mistakes, but all that aside I though it was a very interesting read. I think everybody battles there mind at one time or another....Just one of those battles you have to win on your own. Excellent job though and very unique...5/5 GG23