by LitxUpxWithxLife Oct 12, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Dark and desolate, The Forces are at work. |
The only thing i do not like in this poem is the ending it seemed a little rushed not so creative. |
I thought that the flow was shakey in places and their were a few spelling mistakes, but all that aside I though it was a very interesting read. I think everybody battles there mind at one time or another....Just one of those battles you have to win on your own. Excellent job though and very unique...5/5 GG23 |