The Vociferate Plead Of The Vampire

by LitxUpxWithxLife   Oct 12, 2008


My heart cracks, and my soul bleeds.
For you are all, my wicked entity needs.
I'm barely more than an incomplete shell.
A life without you, My one true Hell.

I need your love and the completion it brings.
My soul-song for you, My heart continually sings.
You help me to see the lighter side of life.
Letting me see through the pain and strife.

Without you the shell would turn hollow.
What a pitiful sight is a Vampire that wallows.
In his misery of a love that's been lost.
My pain all bottled up, left with no exhaust.

A primal scream left in my heart.
You were my joy, my life, my art.
Now my skies are blacker than night.
Even as I look out from this towering height.

I look out at the cold world in which you hide.
Begging and pleading, hoping for this pain to subside.
Never again will I see your pretty face again.
Never again will your love be my Regen.

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Vocab
Vociferate- to speak or cry out loudly or noisily
Entity- A being
Primal- Animalistic
Subside- To desist/To go away
Regen- A tonic that heals and soothes pain

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  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Brilliant idea to put a vocab down at the bottom or i would not of ever got Regen.

    i actually loved this piece alot, the way your did not just bluntly put down the need of her but to describe the reasons you need her in deep dark effextionate way totally blew me away.

    And when she is not around how dark your charecter seems to become turns him almost evil in a way.

    great piece i loved it
    Raindrops-
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really felt the love in this piece and it was great to hear it from you because I feel the same about my fiancee. The only thing in life I can't live without is her, and I don't even want to try.Good flow and excellent word choice, strong finish. 5/5 GG23