by LitxUpxWithxLife Oct 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My heart cracks, and my soul bleeds. |
Brilliant idea to put a vocab down at the bottom or i would not of ever got Regen. |
I really felt the love in this piece and it was great to hear it from you because I feel the same about my fiancee. The only thing in life I can't live without is her, and I don't even want to try.Good flow and excellent word choice, strong finish. 5/5 GG23 |