I really felt the love in this piece and it was great to hear it from you because I feel the same about my fiancee. The only thing in life I can't live without is her, and I don't even want to try.Good flow and excellent word choice, strong finish. 5/5 GG23

Brilliant idea to put a vocab down at the bottom or i would not of ever got Regen.

i actually loved this piece alot, the way your did not just bluntly put down the need of her but to describe the reasons you need her in deep dark effextionate way totally blew me away.

And when she is not around how dark your charecter seems to become turns him almost evil in a way.

great piece i loved it
Raindrops-
5/5