I loved this poem because of it's strong imagery. The wording was very good and I also liked the format you used. 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this poem, i havnt seen one worded so beautifuly in a while =] The rhyming flow was very well done and the structure of the poem suited it perfectly.
Really good job your a talented writter ^^

Wow. i really loved this poem. your use of words nd imagery, it was wonderful. :DD