Comments : My stairway

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Oh my! i really like this. i like how you compared humans to stairs. i love it. keep up the fabulous work!! ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I love your comparison of yourself to the stairs. That was one of the best poems I have ever read here. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    Great ending, I love just how positive this poem is. The narrator in it has obvously gone through some hardships. but overcoming them is the best part of life. Remember a crystal staircase, though beautiful and unblimshed, can easily shatter.

    >~Spirit~>