I thought this was really good. i like it alot! good job!! 5/5

Very thought provoking questions you asked here which made it that much more interesting to read because it had a point, it had a message which you conveyed flawlessly. The flow here was just right with the rhymes not being forced, making it an easy and fun read. This was very deep and the power behind you words were immense. It spoke to me. I'm glad I read this.

Well done.
*5/5*

Okay first off you have a very extensive vocabulary which caught my eye on the first line, the pro of that is that you can make alot more original poems with more ease, but the con in my opinion is its harder to keep flow. and about your schemeing pattern.
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it took until the second to last stanza for me to really like the poem instead of it just being another comment now i can put emotinal comments behind it.Over all, good poem, nearing excelence. 4.5/5 =5/5

I really loved how the title was used in the first line, I like how you got straight to the point rather then letting the poem flow on and on and then somehow incoporating it at the end.

I loved your word choice, and your ability to make the word rhyme was amazing. Great job on using words that aren't so plain, it makes the flow so much better because the flow was not forced.

The last few stanzas asked a lot of questions, and I really liked that.. because I truly felt like I was in your mind and thoughts. It's always interesting to see other people's thoughts and I'm glad you proposed your thoughts as questions, it makes the reader think themselves.

"Imagine a wealth of ideas with double locks
Buried or hidden within a vault or a box"
`Loved these lines for the main fact that you get the reader involved. Again, it makes the reader think or imagine a situation. Great job.

Really unique poem all together. I love the originality behind your poems everytime. Amazing job with the word choice and flow of the poem. Outstanding work. 5/5.

I was really very nice. Each words, phrases, meant a thing. A job well done.

This poems word usage and flow were excellent! But the concept is what caught my eye the most. It had a very deep meaning to it and the questions were real. Not to mention how they were strategically placed to make this poem even more powerful!

The last line of this poem really wrapped it up beautifully! Great clincher! 5/5

I liked it. It is not one that I see every day. The wording was great and you really got your point across. It is also a good poem to get people to think. I gave this poem a 5/5.