This is such a simple poem, but i loved it.
for me, simple poems are the best. i really liked this one.. a lot.

this one line:

or would you break it into?
^^

is it meant to be break it in two?

it might not be, but it just seems like that would fit better.

i loved it, i loved the rhetorical (sorry if spelling is wrong) questions.. overall a great poem :)

5/5