What is up with the funky numbers and stuff in this???

OK.. now that i can read this one, i really like it.

however i found two things:

1: i think its a type-o... "Be duped by your friends" i think its supposed to be "dumped"

2. it seemed like you said some day a lot!

But, it was an excellent poem, just try to watch repetition of the same word. you do an awesome job though!! keep up the good work.