Demented Fairy Tales (Acrostic)

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Oct 13, 2008


Dishonest with every breath you take,
Ever lying in the morning, in bed, awake,
Memorizing each word I have spoken,
Even lines mumbled, untrue, or broken.
Never understanding the words I've told.
Tormented by meanings you can't unfold.
Enticing definitions beyond beliefs.
Disobeying the comfort of reliefs.

Frightening tales in spoken word,
Aligning memories never heard.
Intriguing the minds of children so small.
Reeling them in, yes abducting them all.
You better be careful with what I say,

Telling these fables will end in a bad way.
All children lured in, to stories so dim.
Leaving their souls to a place so grim.
Evil lurks in the fables, the fairy tales read.
So, you best remember all I have said.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    I can never think of fairy tales the same way again! Great job, I had a picture with me the whole way through.

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    This poem was very unique and I enjoyed reading it. I like your choice of vocabulary in each line, it really gives effect to your poem. The title is an eye catcher and I love the ending. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    I have to say Jen, this is one of your best. I thought it was a very good poem, and it was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem was great and had some truth to it. The format was good and the rhyming helped keep the flow going good through out the poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    This was a very good acrostic piece !!
    I loved the darkness in it, too deep and powerful.
    I'm a fan of your poetry since the day I read "Live another day"..I think I haven't read other than it but I'm still a fan =]]

    very well done on this piece, I liked it a lot
    Write on
    5/5
    xxx

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