by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Oct 13, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Dishonest with every breath you take, |
by Conrad
I can never think of fairy tales the same way again! Great job, I had a picture with me the whole way through. |
by SashaMirage
This poem was very unique and I enjoyed reading it. I like your choice of vocabulary in each line, it really gives effect to your poem. The title is an eye catcher and I love the ending. 5/5 |
by Krista
I have to say Jen, this is one of your best. I thought it was a very good poem, and it was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it hun! |
by Brittany C
This poem was great and had some truth to it. The format was good and the rhyming helped keep the flow going good through out the poem. 5/5 |
by Nee
This was a very good acrostic piece !! |