Bow to this piece !!!

incredibly rich with imagery and feelings !!!!

stamp 5/5

Wow. It is so hard to have just flawless flow in an acrostic but you maintained it. I applaud you! I just loved the title and the message behind your words were so true.

Just flawless.
*5/5*

A very clever accrostic this and so true as well, well done Jen on an excellent poem, I like the way the poem uses the pied piper to relate to the lies told by a lover that are sometimes so eagerly believed.
A most enjoyable poem

Grant

I must say that I enjoyed it. There are a few problems that are so minor they aren't even worth mentioning.

I felt that it was very well structured and it didn't take away from the feel of the poem. I felt that you did a very good job.

I reviewed it three times to see if I was missing something, I wasn't.

Sure many will complain about other things...but very well done.

5/5

You're also going on my Favorites list.

Sweeeeeeet yooo

This was a very good acrostic piece !!
I loved the darkness in it, too deep and powerful.
I'm a fan of your poetry since the day I read "Live another day"..I think I haven't read other than it but I'm still a fan =]]

very well done on this piece, I liked it a lot
Write on
5/5
xxx

This poem was great and had some truth to it. The format was good and the rhyming helped keep the flow going good through out the poem. 5/5

I have to say Jen, this is one of your best. I thought it was a very good poem, and it was very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it hun!

This poem was very unique and I enjoyed reading it. I like your choice of vocabulary in each line, it really gives effect to your poem. The title is an eye catcher and I love the ending. 5/5

I can never think of fairy tales the same way again! Great job, I had a picture with me the whole way through.