I love it when people post lyrics. I always feel like there's that extra element of creativity, because let's face it: you have a tune for this, even if it's only in your head. And lyrically it's very good, with a melancholy depth that demonstrates a number of emotions all blanketed by the theme of loss throughout.

If it's not overly critical of me, though, I would say that "more" in the fourth line seems a little extraneous, and the line "please give me your promise" doesn't seem to pertain to anyone or anything we've been introduced to anywhere else in the lyrics.

Those two points aside, this is great stuff. I'd love to hear it set to some melancholy lone guitar music. I'd also be interested what music you had in mind!