Breathless

by Sorinity   Oct 14, 2008


You are the everything and nothing
i can't touch you but i can love you,
you are the air in my lungs
without you i am breathless

Actually it was written to me...left me breathless to be honest

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "i can't touch you but i can love you, "
    `I needs to be capitolized in both places.

    "you are the air in my lungs
    without you i am breathless"
    `This line was a bit too plain for me, something I've heard before.. jazz it up, make it your own.

    I'm gonna have to say 4/5, this wasn't original nor was it a poem.

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