Great poem love the emotion you put into it. great flow too. 5/5 (i just wrote like 10 new poems if you want to check them out)

Aw, thats very sweet, the emotion in it is very powerful and i must admit i've had that dream myself about people i love. if i can make a suggestion, just fix up some of the typos in your poems.
even with them i liked this one. it was very sweet.

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