Confronting God

by Mister 47   Oct 14, 2008


I look and you and defy, what I can do or say
I am determined to say what I want, and walk my way

Don't say I can not protect the person I love so much
I won't allow her to be hurt, or even someone touch

You listen to me very good, I am not saying again
You better know what you created, you created a man

This is the women I love and I cherish all my heart
I won't sit and see these demons take us apart

I will stand in the way and be hurt in her place
But I will not accept to see a tear on her face

You better listen to me up there, I am talking to you
You can hit me you can do all you want to do

If I am ready to stand inform of you and say all these
You know what is in my heart, help me please

I humbly talk to you in a confronting tone
I am standing in front of you with shaking bones

I love her, My Lord, please do understand
And help me be with her, happy at the end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very good story and a wonderful love story just that. I know that there is a deep meaning in asking god to kill you.

    It is the type of love that many wish to obtain.

    I loved this poem and wouldn't change anything 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great poem love the emotion you put into it. great flow too. 5/5 (i just wrote like 10 new poems if you want to check them out)