Cinderella

by JustKristina   Oct 15, 2008


Cinderella up on stage,
Dancing without a care.
Smile pretty, big, and wide.
The little girls will stare.

Beauty and enchanting grace,
What every girl wants to be.
Smile pretty, big, and wide.
This is all they see.

Example of a perfect life
Shes living a dream come true.
Smile pretty, big, and wide.
Is she fooling you?

Beauty shining bright and far
Such a radiant face.
Smile pretty, big, and wide
Would you take her place?

Waltzing the perfect couple dance
Stand up straight and tall.
Smile pretty, big, and wide
Never can she fall.

She blows a kiss to the little girls
Waves her hand up high.
Smile pretty, big, and wide
Knowing she can't cry.

Announcer booms his voice real loud.
Cinderella puts on her crown.
Smile pretty, big, and wide.
She hides her dangerous frown.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is Amazing. you created a fairytale for the lonely girl. and its almost as if only you know her secret... shes beautiful, and popular, but lonely.... and tourtured. great job here...
    and remember.. i love you girl!
    <3Ashley

  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. Another amazingly insightful poem. You painted a picture with the words, and I was very happy to be looking at it. You can feel the energy behind it. Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Whisper

    I absolutely LOVE this poem. Just cause I can imagine you in every word. the emotion spilled out and i wanted to smile but cry. it was totally amazing. and the way you fit that line in. every stanza had it and it fit perfectly. like, it wasn't just added in there without it fitting the flow.

    i like when people use questions in their poems. ya know. give the reader a little "hm?" =)

    im not good at criticizing. especially people i love. and honestly. there is nothing for me to critcize in this poem. if there was. i would let you know. but this is pure perfection.

    wonderful poem made by a wonderful poet =)
    <3 you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    So wonderful, It sucks you right up and lets you go with a chill... I like how you used the same line in each stanza.... gave it some OOMPH!!:) you should check my latest one out "Phobia of being alone"
    Enjoy!!
    Maddi

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