by JustKristina Oct 15, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Cinderella up on stage, |
WOW!! i love it! its so powerful! |
by 0oAshleyo0
This is Amazing. you created a fairytale for the lonely girl. and its almost as if only you know her secret... shes beautiful, and popular, but lonely.... and tourtured. great job here... |
Wow. Another amazingly insightful poem. You painted a picture with the words, and I was very happy to be looking at it. You can feel the energy behind it. Amazing. |
by Whisper
I absolutely LOVE this poem. Just cause I can imagine you in every word. the emotion spilled out and i wanted to smile but cry. it was totally amazing. and the way you fit that line in. every stanza had it and it fit perfectly. like, it wasn't just added in there without it fitting the flow. |
by Jessie
So wonderful, It sucks you right up and lets you go with a chill... I like how you used the same line in each stanza.... gave it some OOMPH!!:) you should check my latest one out "Phobia of being alone" |