Wow i really like this one its one of my favs nd i can relate to some of the emotions

Oh, I really liked this piece! Simply, but powerful, it truly oozed raw emotion. I really like the part about your tears each holding a different fear, that is a great mind picture/meaning. (: It stuck with me. The fluidity was good too; a short but solid rhythm. Two suggestions: this line --

"I can't eat, I cannot breath"
I wouldn't use a contraction, and
then 'cannot' in the same sentence,
it threw me off, use one or the other.

"I can't eat, I cannot breath"
'breath' should be 'breathe'

Good job! Keep it up, looking forward
to reading more.