Dear God

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Oct 15, 2008


Dear God, it's me again.
I need to talk to you.
You already know what it's about.
It's really nothing new.

Dear God, I still love him,
With every piece of my heart.
But you knew this would happen,
From the very start.

Dear God, it hurts so bad.
Sometimes I can't breathe.
God, why did you take him?
He meant everything to me!

Dear God, I'm sick of crying.
I'm afraid I'm gonna drown.
These memories won't go away.
I still remember how he sounds.

Dear God, I miss him,
More and more each day.
Lord, I love him so much!
Why did he walk away?

Dear God, I know you can hear me.
I know you can feel the pain I'm in.
Lord, I feel like giving up.
There's no use in trying to win.

Dear God, I can't take much more.
I'm destroyed inside and out.
I wish that I could say something,
But I swallow all my shouts.

Dear God, I'm sorry I sound angry.
I don't blame you,
But, Lord, I don't wanna believe,
That me and him are through.

Dear God, I have one last favor to ask.
If we were meant to be,
Please send a saving angel,
And bring him back to me.

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 16 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    Hey ambo I love this one I am going to favorite it -lol- but i give you a 5/5 I read this when you first wrote it and now I'm happy that you have Hunter LOve ALways UR BFF caleb.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Omg this poem is so beautiful and sad it is very excellent 5/5 keep up the amazing work.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Amazing poem *5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Psychopathic

    It is very good. reminds me of some trouble ive been through. if its meant to be it will happen. if its not then, though you dont kno it yet, there is sum1 better for you out there. just keep ur head up.

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    "Dear God, I can't take much more.
    I'm destroyed inside and out.
    I wish that I could say something,
    But I swallow all my shouts."

    Amazing poem, truly. I would like to give some friendly advice here though. The last line is a bit... off. It doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem.. i may have solution though.. instead of "But i swallow all my shouts" maybe try "But i swallow every shout" Because in "Out" there is no 's' like there is in 'shouts' so the flow is off. Thats really all i have to add. Great poem though.
    *Chaotic Angel*

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