Comments : No tears......No cry

  • 16 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    Nice job...
    One grammar error i caught though, i believe it was suppose to be "no tears"... but it was written "mo tears" just so you are aware.
    Keep it up.
    *Chaotic Angel*

  • 15 years ago

    by dontlookpassmytears

    Thank you for the comment

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very simple but yet so deep. great poem. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by dontlookpassmytears

    Shanik thank you for the comment.