Pins and needles
by Obscura Oct 15, 2008
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Am i alive or am i dead? is this real or is it in my head? everyday is the same i feel as I'm going insane is this a dream or is it real? its hard to tell when you can't use your heart to feel because its too small is it even there at all? my soul is twisted and black love and feeling is what i lack if you come close i will attack if your wise you will stay away these days cannot last my life is shutting down fast i am ending my mind descending time to die no more pretending |
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16 years ago
by meganmarie
This was interrsting. i love it. dark, intense, depressing, deep and emotional. so many dark emotions. you use your words well. i quite like it. amazing poet.
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16 years ago
So much emotion in this poem....the intensity and your hatred...is very well described. i think it shgould have a little more structure..but it doesn't matter it's still has a big impact on me...it's a short poem, but it has so much to tell. the word choice was excellent..and i can relate...to every word...keep it up hun...
**Ada**
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