So much emotion in this poem....the intensity and your hatred...is very well described. i think it shgould have a little more structure..but it doesn't matter it's still has a big impact on me...it's a short poem, but it has so much to tell. the word choice was excellent..and i can relate...to every word...keep it up hun...

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

This was interrsting. i love it. dark, intense, depressing, deep and emotional. so many dark emotions. you use your words well. i quite like it. amazing poet.
--aprilsconspiracy*