That;s beautiful.... a lovely ending...so very intense and sorrowful....I think the whole theme of the poem was really good...because it starts off a dream and talks about how lovely the dream is and how you want to stay there forever with that special someone...because you feel warm and comforted..and then its time to wake up and your heart shatters....
its just such a powerful idea...
really lovely.

Awww.. its so .... ummm... im speechless. i really liked it. i like the last two lines the best. 5/5 nice write. ~KM~

"The way it is the was its supposed to be"
`Um, way confusing.. did you mean...
"The way it is was, is the way it's supposed to be."
I have no idea, the wording is very awkward.

"There you are nice to see you again, the one for me someone more than a friend"
`This is way too long, you could split it up into two lines instead after the comma after again, though.

Overall, I was pretty bored.. sorry. You never captured my attention at all, which meant you didn't have much of my attention for any of the poem. 4/5.

Bery good. I love how you used your words.