Forever I Have Lost You

by lost in the words   Oct 16, 2008


Forever i have lost you,
yes forever it will be.
My heart will never mend,
the end it will never see.

My hope rebuilds over lost words,
our passionate journey replays in my mind,
But your face is only a memory to me,
gathered from those very moments in time.

Gone with the wind is what you are,
never to return again.
So I guess its time to tell my heart,
that this truly is the end.

But why won't it believe me?
Why won't the words register inside?
Is my heart trying to tell me something,
something that i have tried to confide.

~~I'm not quite done with this poem but i would appreciate some feedback on it :)~~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey girl,

    I enjoyed reading this poem. It's a truly fantastic write. It started very powerful and it didn't lose the power. Well done.

    Lots of love,
    Mona