Very Origional Idea :) Love it :) I really liked the flow of this poem and the structure, it is all very well done.

'So beautiful in its simplicity
Everyone yearns and searches for it"

this really makes me think of christianity, I am christian and I see people looking for that thing that will make them happy and i live it, it is so simple and yet the most amazing way of life :) Not that everything is all buterflys and cupcakes, even as a christian life is still hard, I don't want to make it sound perfect, but it is simple. God Loves us and we need to love everyone. It will be ok, thats my motto ;)

Sorry, if its a weird comment, but its what this poem makes me think of, great poem :)

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