Rebel, and cut me to pieces

by Mister 47   Oct 16, 2008


When you cut me I bleed from my eyes
They drop like the rain of the skies
You can not see them I hide behind the PC
All you can hear me say is : I see.

You take those words and slaughter me
I open my chest and I say let it be
If you only can see this pitiful heart of mine
Bruises are not quite to describe those lines

I can see your tear with every whoop you make
You hope me to let you go, and my confidence shake
But you can not shake a mountain of steel
You can not change or shake how I feel

Cut me hard so they hear my scream from a mile
You won't see on my face except a smile
You think it is easy to smile while you cry
If I say it is, it would be a lie

What is love but a tear on a smiling face
And a scream you take and a dream you chase
It is when you catch a tear with your hands
And hide it in your heart at the end

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  • 16 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    I love this poem.
    It seems deep and powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Amazing amazing amazing!!

    I love the way this poem flows

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    First of all when i read the first stanza i was like... what? but re read it... and it is amazing.
    When you cut me I bleed from my eyes
    ^^ i love how you say, bleed from my eyes.. thats really emphasising that the tears you cry really do come from your heart.

    You won't see on my face except a smile
    You think it is easy to smile while you cry
    If I say it is, it would be a lie
    ^^ Yeah, i really agree with this stanza and im sure many of us can relate to smiling with tears in our eyes.. Even I can relate.. i never let people see me cry. i think those three lines were truely beautiful.

    What is love but a tear on a smiling face
    And a scream you take and a dream you chase
    It is when you catch a tear with your hands
    And hide it in your heart at the end
    ^ the wording in this stanza blew me away. It was fantastic. I really loved this stanza, it was a great ending to a fabulous poem. It was.. magnificent.

    Keep writing :]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    What is love but a tear on a smiling face
    And a scream you take and a dream you chase
    It is when you catch a tear with your hands
    And hide it in your heart at the end
    - this by far was the best written stanza.

    i loved this poem though it was really touching, really sad as well though, i agree with a lot of it too.

    your vocabulary was really simple- which i love i hate all this complex jardon that everyone is trying to pull off- when they don't have a clue what they are doing- keeping it simply makes it easier remembered, and it was a memorizing little write i must say.

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