Great poem.

Another amazing poem...the way of a man you captured it well....and i'm not saying it because you are a guy..some guys act like this..but can never put their ways in words..

The flow was flawless and the rhyming was also amazing.
keep it up!!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

What is love but a tear on a smiling face
And a scream you take and a dream you chase
It is when you catch a tear with your hands
And hide it in your heart at the end

^^^I really, really adored that last stanza!
Mesmerizing words, sad but ever so beautiful:)

Take care my friend,

5/5 Ingrid

This poem was wonderful! I loved it. Especially the very last verse. It was so true and so full of meaning. Keep up the amazing writing!
~Kayla

Wow this is really good....5/5
its strange your style but in a goood way i like it

"What is love but a tear on a smiling face
And a scream you take and a dream you chase
It is when you catch a tear with your hands
And hide it in your heart at the end "

great ending
laura

What is love but a tear on a smiling face
And a scream you take and a dream you chase
It is when you catch a tear with your hands
And hide it in your heart at the end
- this by far was the best written stanza.

i loved this poem though it was really touching, really sad as well though, i agree with a lot of it too.

your vocabulary was really simple- which i love i hate all this complex jardon that everyone is trying to pull off- when they don't have a clue what they are doing- keeping it simply makes it easier remembered, and it was a memorizing little write i must say.

First of all when i read the first stanza i was like... what? but re read it... and it is amazing.
When you cut me I bleed from my eyes
^^ i love how you say, bleed from my eyes.. thats really emphasising that the tears you cry really do come from your heart.

You won't see on my face except a smile
You think it is easy to smile while you cry
If I say it is, it would be a lie
^^ Yeah, i really agree with this stanza and im sure many of us can relate to smiling with tears in our eyes.. Even I can relate.. i never let people see me cry. i think those three lines were truely beautiful.

What is love but a tear on a smiling face
And a scream you take and a dream you chase
It is when you catch a tear with your hands
And hide it in your heart at the end
^ the wording in this stanza blew me away. It was fantastic. I really loved this stanza, it was a great ending to a fabulous poem. It was.. magnificent.

Keep writing :]
5/5

Amazing amazing amazing!!

I love the way this poem flows

5/5

I love this poem.
It seems deep and powerful.

Good job