by Michael Verterel Oct 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She paced the room impatiently, |
by meganmarie
Wow. i really do love this. deep, powerful, full of raw emotion. perfect. when i read the title i almost expected it to be sad and terrible, but it turned out to be a happy ending and i love it. awesomejob. |
Wow, amazing job.love the ryhming in this... 7/5 |
This is so beautiful. It literally gave me chills. I have known many people to have that felling. One being my mom. Amazing poem. Keep up the great work! |
That reminds me of someone i knew.....its so sad, you can not even discribe the feeling... |