The Hospital Scene

by Michael Verterel   Oct 17, 2008


She paced the room impatiently,
As her deepest fear grew immensely.
It's been hours since they've arrived,
But still no news, Could he have died?

Moments passed before the doctor came,
Calmly calling out her name.
"Your son just had surgery,
But he's safe because of me."

"I need to see him," she begged and begged.
Without word the doctor shook his head.
She entered room number sixty-five,
so pleased her child was still alive.

She knew he was in a secure place,
So her tears faded to a smile on her face.
She couldn't imagine losing her son.
He was but her first and only one...

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  • 16 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow. i really do love this. deep, powerful, full of raw emotion. perfect. when i read the title i almost expected it to be sad and terrible, but it turned out to be a happy ending and i love it. awesomejob.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Wow, amazing job.love the ryhming in this... 7/5

  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    This is so beautiful. It literally gave me chills. I have known many people to have that felling. One being my mom. Amazing poem. Keep up the great work!
    ~Kayla

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    That reminds me of someone i knew.....its so sad, you can not even discribe the feeling...

    best part: "Moments passed before the doctor came,
    Calmly calling out her name."

    ^^good ryhming =]

    great write 5/5

    ~tia

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