When Beautiful Girls Cry

by LitxUpxWithxLife   Oct 17, 2008


All the things you're looking for, your heart can't seem to find.
Such a shame to see a beautiful girl crying by herself, all alone.
But the answer was so simple, right in front of you, it left you blind.
So shocked you couldn't see all the affection I've finally shown.

Our hearts connected on some deeper level, can this love really be true?
My life has begun to change, because I see the world in a different hue.
Everything you've given me, must be all but real.
Because you will never know just how special you make me feel.

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  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Sweet, short, deep, simple amazing, thoughtful, poem. lovely and beutifully written.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Very sweet poem Andrew,
    they rhyme/rhythm was a little off but it is very lovely

  • 16 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Dis poem was ok iim not qona lie.
    dha flow was off and youh shoulda rhymed throuqhout dha whole thinq.
    it was really short youh prolly shoulda went into more detailsz.
    but dhat point did come across ta me.
    4/5

    -antoniaaa*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ellie

    Hey there, who's this poems about? I love it its so simple but has great wording at the same time.

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