Comments : When Beautiful Girls Cry

  • 16 years ago

    by Ellie

    Hey there, who's this poems about? I love it its so simple but has great wording at the same time.

  • 16 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Dis poem was ok iim not qona lie.
    dha flow was off and youh shoulda rhymed throuqhout dha whole thinq.
    it was really short youh prolly shoulda went into more detailsz.
    but dhat point did come across ta me.
    4/5

    -antoniaaa*

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Very sweet poem Andrew,
    they rhyme/rhythm was a little off but it is very lovely

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Sweet, short, deep, simple amazing, thoughtful, poem. lovely and beutifully written.
    --lovedroughtmelody