by kelleyana Oct 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I have nothing to do with sadness, it's a burden, |
Good |
by Cara
Very well written. i love that you incorporated such positivity, but also, sadness. |
What a wonderful write!! |
by Lauren
It's really good. It flows great I really loved it. |
Very creative, I like the way each you began each stanza with a negative line, "I have nothing..."and ended the last one with a positive line ," I have all...". Nice use of contrast. |