Comments : Avalanche ( Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    I love Haikus!

    That's very good but short too....ha,ha,haaa!!!
    Seriously, I'm not making fun of you.
    I was reading a lot of long poems and you caught me of guard...that's what I was laughing about. ;)

    very gooood! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This is a great poem because it is very true. I also liked the format that you used. I do not think that I could write one like this. Good job :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A wonderful haiku, very deep and heartfelt. Nice work, your words seem to create such images in my mind, a pleasure to read! :) Keep writing, always and forever....