Once Upon A Time

by JustKristina   Oct 17, 2008


Once upon a time.
A girl believed in you.
Fairytales and happy endings.
Always coming true.

Once upon a time.
This girl was happy and free.
This storm upon the horizon.
No one bothered to see.

But once upon a time.
The rain began to fall.
And you, Prince Charming, ran.
Leaving her with it all.

Now Little Cinderella.
Stands lone in the rain.
Listening to the thunder.
Watching her life change.

She glances all around.
Seeing love as being her crime
But never again will she see

A once upon a time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is a good write. I appreciate your attempt to write a emotional poem like this. It's well constructed. Good one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awesome poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    Cute, lilo, short poem. i like it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW I LOVE IT!!!!! It's one of the best poems I have ever read. I love how you use Prince Charming and Cinderellla. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    100/10!

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    Oh-my-god.
    Kristina.
    wow.
    this is ABSOLUTLY the BEST poem i have EVER read! i love it! 100 and 10 percent here! great great GREAT job!!!!!!

    "But once upon a time.
    The rain began to fall.
    And you, Prince Charming, ran.
    Leaving her with it all."
    isnt this always the way it happens... the guy runs, leaving the girl to feel alone and used... Great way of showing this! love it!!!!
    oh wow... i still cant get over how AMA-ZA-ZAZING this really is!

    15/5 :)

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