Okay people here seriously lack sense of enjoying the poems.
I'm irritated that this poem has no rate/comments.

I loved it and I'm amazed with your dark and sad ideas in poems..they touch me like no other.
that was extraordinary and outstanding !!

Wishing for hope to say I'm innocent,
Two mysteries invade my shallow mind,
Whispering words so painful as meant,
The gears in my brain begin to grind,

this part was just incredible...I really liked the wording here !

I have nothing else to say other than your choice of words and your creativity is stunning me more each time I read something for you.
Don't quit poetry please you're such an awesome poet.

write on

WOW!!!! I love this peom...your wording is so outside the box and I love the inuendos..my favorite stanza is the last one. HOTTTT