What a lovely poem although the person who this was meant for would not have been happy to read this, the poem was well written with a good meter and rhyme.
Your subject matter seems it came from the heart rather than just something made up, though i could be wrong.
All in all a poem worth the reading, well done and thanks for sharing

Grant

Awww that was really nice well done...x

Good write as u always do friend.. keep it up..

Best wishes, Karan

Wow one sided love ... and you handled it such amaizigly , blaming your self for not being enough or deserve that love ... is like just i dont think that is right in a way ,... in my opignion we are all worth it ,. it is jsut we want it to work for it or not ...

but i loved the way you end it !! it si like the perfect way to kill it !!..
great one