WOW!!! sinse when have you become so wise?? Ha,ha,ha...That is excellent! I have a quote that I have not yet submitted, that you reminded me of.

"To reflect upon life, is to be enlightened;
to dwell in the past, is the path to your death."

I'm looking forward to reading your other poems aswell! ;)

*clapping*

Well done on such an inspirational write. I find it hard to believe that you are just 15 years old...you must have a mind full of experience to write with such insight and depth of thought.

I like how you have singled out certain words, leaving them on a line, alone to shine out their message, LIFE, GOOD, BAD..also DON'T WASTE IT!

Well done on this piece, it tells the reader alot about the author.

Take care

Michael

Oh wow! this poem was amazing! its funny that you read each line and think about it then you have a line that says dont thin too much on it or it wont make sense. i agree completely. follow the flow. your words are very inspiring and true.

amazing work again! keep it up xx

Wow, i really did enjoy this one. You are giving the hopeless, hope. Which is fantastic. i really liked the unique format. Its very inspirational.. and i like that.
My favourite line:
Go to school expecting to learn nothing and come home excited that you did.
^^ fantastic.. i dont know why but it really stood out to me.

This is a great write.
5/5

Nice work. So true and inspirational. A really great poem to read after a bad day too. I think you did a really good job on this one. Keep it up i really liked this one! 5/5