I really enjoyed this poem...It surely makes you think and look back on many thing.

:)

Kathleen

A good write, and my only suggestion for u to make it any better like u asked for is to copy and past it to a word document, then try the thesourus (uhh cant spell sorry lol) for some of the more "bland" words. think about it like a meal. how can u spice it up? i think this work would go from high school project to profound expression of self with just a few replacements of some "bigger", more complex wording. 5/5 tho!