On a Bed of Roses

by Ingrid   Oct 18, 2008


On a bed of roses I give myself to you
and as the stars and moon shine down on us
on this magical summer night I hold you oh so tight
For the first time in my life everything feels right

Soft kisses you impress upon my skin,
tenderly caressing every inch with care
Saturating my body and soul with all of you
Whispering I will forever love you and be true

Taking turns in satisfying each other' s needs
until the desire becomes too strong to hold
And passion rides freely upon our lovers field
To our need to become one we both yield

While the warm summer breeze fondles our skin
sweat trickles down two heaving bodies lost in lust
Pace quickens and breath deepens even more
Overwhelming climax leaves us satisfied to the core

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow this is poem is truely passionate n sweet...u realli captivate me with ur 1st stanza;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Aww Ingrid
    what a sweet passion you penned in this piece.
    absolutely breath-taking .

    I loved the fact that every first 2 lines in the stanzas didn't rhyme, but the second 2 did..that was really new and creative.

    I don't really read romance poems, but I gotta admit you capture my heart =]
    Write on
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    Indeed a poem that speeks volumes to the heart! Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I loved the opening stanza. and the ending was just as great. a very sensual and romantic write. =]

    - Liz

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully written, with so much romance and love behind the words. A great story of two people deeply in love with each other, great descriptions! Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

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